This section is dedicated to edits I have made, nothing major just rewording and adding several things I will include the sections that I change below. Since this is my first fanfic I have ever written actually the first book I have ever written and my writing is not very good I wanted to update you on the rewriting process! I will let you now when to check back here as I plan on updating regularly!
Explanation 2 Chapter ALL
Bilé will now on be refereed to as Bile. It is still the same name just please remember that. I just don't want to have to keep looking up the accent over the e every single time I type it. But anyone who happens to know of a better way to do it like a code or something I can type in on my key board let me know and I will definitely use it!
Change 1 Chapter 18 Part 1
"Waffles, Juju, Backpack or BP for short, and Rysk. Rysk and BP are the boys and Waffles and Juju are girls." Cake smiled at her kittens.
(Name changes)
Change 2 Chapter 12
Marshall wasn't 14 he was 341 years old I figured it would make more sense as for the aging process. Although he is 341 years old he looks 14. I wanted to make sure he still had time with Simone after the Mushroom war. Basically she saved him and Abdeera took him back to the Nightosphere too make sure she had a successor.
Explanation 1
I tend to use odd names when creating new characters. Especially the demons, I didn't have odd names for Marshall Lee's friends because I wanted to keep the names as close to their personalities as possible.
Milo- is a "Southern Gentleman", and having never lived in the south myself this was the most "southern" name I could think of. Thats why he says stuff like darlin' or darling. Others will come about soon as well.
Trey- is just a fun guy. His name literally means three cards or dominoes, so as you will find out later he is an impeccable gambler and party animal.
Tucker- means tailor. I love the name but I didn't want him to be a tailor so I figured maybe since he was so old that his original would have been to out dated to he picked a new name. (Also will be mentioned on a later date.)
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FanfictionMarshall Lee- Do I love her? Yes. I remember the day i finally realized i did. It was the day she saved us from the Linch. I have never seen a more powerful strong willed person in my life, all 900 years of it. And that was the moment I fell for he...
