Lily reacts to her old chapters

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I know.... I have no excuses.... and I am sorry. Please feel free to forgive me but I get if you hold it against me. Trust me I know the feeling of a book not being updated. I am sorry.

Anyway, on with this chapter...

I am actually kind of scared for this. I have seen lots of authors do this and I thought, let's do it! I know how crap my writing was when I first started this book but who cares?! (Except me of course... I'm going to humiliated. Feel free to make fun of me in the comments, my old writing deserves it!) Quick warning: there is probably going to be swearing... yes my writing was so bad that I am going to swear at it. Also my spelling, grammar, and punctuation was so bad (it still is!)

P.S. Thanks for 5k views and 200+ votes. You guys are the best!!!🎉

Are you guys ready, because I'm not....


Hi, I'm Brad Cole. 

What a gripping first line! Also his name...😣

The hottest guy in school. All the girls want to date me but I have my eyes set on the one and only Annabeth Chase.

This is actually so bad and cliche. FML.

"Did you hear about the hot new guy in the school?" Asked my girlfriend Melissa. She was caked in makeup. I then saw her. Annabeth Chase walked into the room.

I remember that I really wanted to say that 'caked with makeup thing'.

"Hey Melissa, I am breaking up with you."

"Oh well." She said, "I might have a chance with that hot guy." Not as hot as me I thought.

No. Just No!

I got up and walked over to Annabeth. " Hey babe, wanna go to the movies tonight?"

Suddenly, a fist connected with my nose. I opened my eyes. A guy with black hair and sea-green eyes was wiping the blood off his fist. Annabeth looked up and laughed. "Annie! Don't be like that!" I said.

Violence and cliche, what else? 

Her eyes darkened. "Don't call me Annie." She got up and went up to the boy. She is probably going to slap him for what he did to me. Instead he kissed her. Obviously she is gonna push him away. Or not. The kiss lasted for about 20 seconds. "Honestly Perce I can defend myself." He smiled. "I know but he was staring at you in a very flirty manner." The guy said.

This is so sh*t. WTF is that 20 second kiss thing?!?! They will suffocate!

And hand in hand they walked out of the classroom and years later I saw the grey eyed girl walking along with a toddler with the same gray eyes.

That last sentence does not mean anything! He could have seen a random grey eyed girl with a random grey eyed toddler. I was officially an idiot.

Thanks for reading this crappy chapter and I am sorry about not updating. I hope you enjoyed my sh*t writing and my sucky commentary. I will try to update more. Please comment, vote and follow. Thanks!

//Lily out

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