please comment this time and tell me what you think????!!! i cant read your mind...so please tell me what you think about this poem and the rest that i have uploaded lately... thanks! and vote too! ;) hehe...its just dat i dont noe how you guys think about my poems...so yea...i need feedbacks!
hope u like it!
My stranger, My mysterious Friend.
you entered my life,
like a shooting star.
i wonder what you think about me,
i wonder where you are.
you put a smile on my face,
and you got me off pace.
your a special friend,
and i can see.
deep in your eyes,
i know your hiding something from me.
why are you so kind to me?
or are you crushing me?
well, lets not expect things to happen to both of us,
its hard to gain, its hard to trust.
why do you call me special and nice?
why do you call me beautiful?
why do you give me such good advice?
stop making me laugh,
cause it wont work.
your smiles, your poutings and those smirks.
it wont work to make me happy.
but if you would look into my eyes,
you would see full of despise.
heart broken, sadness.
but why are you always there?
when i didnt even ask you to.
is love at first sight true?
will that lover be you?
no, i cant fall for you,
no. you might break my heart.
but something is going in the way.
that is making us, be a part
oh god help me! please dont make me get heartbroken again! oh please dont!
-x-x-x-x-x--x-x-x-xx-x-x-x-
is it nice? hopefully.
well im dedicating this to...to my really good friend online "No more Usernames" i noe its a wierd name...but who cares!!? hes my friend! so im dedicating dis poem to him! :)
