Heyy guys, this is thatsmybias , I'm reviewing Moon in Nine. It's gonna be the first book that I'm reviewing here in ShiningStarsProgram. I'm just sharing my thoughts so, please dont take it by heart.
Okay, firstly I'd like to give a hand of applause, because this is my first time reading a mix Arabic book, like Islamic type. It makes me feel at home, because my country is this kind of malay country.
Back to the point.
Prologue, i find that you didn't edit the book and there's a few minor mistakes, so maybe you could go to the edit section if you dont want to much work for yourself, you could ask anyone to help :)
I find it interesting how you put new vocabularies ( this me for me ). Maybe you could shorten out some of the unimportant parts? Because some readers may just ignore that and swipe down till they get to the interesting part, i mean we all do that, but we dont want that. Instead of throwing them, maybe shorten it and put some sparks to make it more interesting.
Avoid making a long paragraph if it's gonna be boring okayy ?
First chapter, omg, i love the poetry, i love how you did that.
This is my perspective so I'm so sorry if you dont agree.
But i dont see any excitement in the story YET.
But I'll keep on reading though i dont have to, I'll add it in to my personal acc's library, so dont let me down !! I'll be looking forward to it. I hope this helped maybe a little.
