Book: When The Storm Hits
Author: DruidQueen17
When I saw your request and was told to review this book,I thought,
Uff,let just read this book until chapter 5 and then poof,off into the world of reviewing.
But when I started reading your book,I forgot about everything around me and kept reading until I get to the final chap!
It eveb freaked me out since I just started reading..uh....last night...boo..*Banshee woman scream*
So Let's get to the review.
Story is interesting.
Chapters were short indeed,but they should be,or the total things won't be so interesting.
Charachters are good,there weren't so much charachters but I liked it!
The main charachter,Lilian is interesting,I like her.
I like them all!
The charachter that I like so much in the book is Rider,even though he just appeared in less chapters,He seems to be having an interesting backstory and secret,exited to see how it goes in next update.
Grammar is good.I didn't find any mistake in your book :D !
The story is great! But there is...a Weak point.
I don't like the way you made other charachters have a weakness,but not Lilian.
I know this is kind of Woman Up book.and I like that Lilian is being a fearless girl who wants to be a crime journalist.
But she being the main charachter,had no serious weakness to show,she did cry and even felt like betrayed,yeah but it seemed like the horror scenes never affected her,so she felt a little unrelated to it,but it's not a big problem at all :)
But to be honest,I liked Landon more than Lilian.
Final Analyse:
This is the finest Mystery Horror I have readed so far,I love the book and the way of your writing!
I have a favourite chapter in the book that really freaked me out,Chapter 5.
The ending of the chapter 5 sent shivers in my body.Really!
Final words,I love the book soo much and going to keep reading it until it ends!I'm glad that I got the chance to read and review this book of yours!
Thank you and hope you found our review helpful! :D
Reviewed by: NaeemNaufer
