It's Only Us ~ @ZihanShahadatHossain

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Review for Its Only Us by @ZihanShahadatHossain

Prologue:: The prologue was a bit confusing, had too much skipping around and not enough description. A few grammatical and spelling errors. Other than that good job.

Chapter one:: Chapter one had too much skipping around and not quite enough detail. Had a few grammatical and spelling errors. Great character development and POV's.

Chapter two:: Skipping too much. A few spelling errors. Great detail and I love the relationship building up!

Chapter three:: Great detail. Ooohh that twist!! Love it!!

Chapter four:: I am in love with the twist! A bit confusing though.

Chapter five:: Skipping too much, other than that great!

Overall:: ...I love it!!! Keep up the great work @ZihanShahadatHossain

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