I finished this story a while ago, and I loved the entire thing. I then noticed how dull it was, no huge plot twists, not much detail, and definitely not enough character development. So, about six months ago, I vowed to start editing it. And.... well... Just let it sit. I didn't touch it for the longest time.
So, a couple days ago, I decided to at least fix Alma and Ruben's bio's because, let's face it, they sucked. They had no personalities and honestly, SO MANY DAMN TYPOS!!!!!!! Unless you don't know me, like, at all, you'll know that typos are pretty much the bane of my existence. I can't emphasis how much I hate them.
AAAAANNNNNYYYYYYYWWWWWWAAAAAAAYYYYYYYSSSSS... I did that, and, I got the urge to just start editing it all. So, I've made an easy way to tell which chapters are edited. Chapters that are already edited, added in, or being worked on, will have either 'Alma - ' or 'Ruben - ' before the name and number of the chapter. SO, without further ado, go ahead and read on.
ALSO, If chapter numbers are out of order, say, there are two chapter twos and then a Chapter four, don't worry about it because I'm currently adding and deleting chapters while editing them.
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Problems (EDITING)
Teen FictionAlma Kaye Landon is a 17 year old girl who was born in the UK. She suffers from major depression and cuts her wrists, believing she is ugly and that no one loves her. Then she meets him. He makes her promise that she will stop, because she IS beauti...
