Trainwreck?

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I made a story.

And as you can tell, it's Hetalia.

And if you're reading this, then this means that you must like reading Hetalia stories.

This story I'm making is that they're at a party/ball, yet there's a murderer amongst them, terrorizing them.

Also,  I have this other story of Hetalia!  It's kind of similar but this is based of a play I saw.
But, I really hope you can stop by and read this story and give some feedback on how I can improve. I'd love some feedback! It really motivates me because it shows me that people actually read this and see a way it can be better, which could better your interest to the story.

I'm trying very hard for it to make sense and still be interesting. And also, I plan on making another chapter scenario sometime this next weekend, but I'll need to think of a clean idea and grow upon it. Really, I've very excited for this and for all these ideas. No more writer's block YES!

The two stories I mentioned are:
http://my.w.tt/UiNb/YFXkdfNOQA
And
http://my.w.tt/UiNb/6fwDyiQOQA
Which are also just on my profile so.  .
Really,  I would appreciate the shit out of everyone who checks it out.

Thanks!
See you all sometime later!

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