Man's Breath Review

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Man's Breath

Author: IslandApricot

Genre: Fantasy

Summary: Elan is a prince of Courthaven, he may seem normal at first but he has the power to time travel. He knows about the future. Elan is not proud to be a prince of Courthaven, his mother and sister are filled with wickedness and fill people's heads with fear. Elan is the next generation of the royal bloodline. But he wants to break the chain of wickedness and fear, and the townspeople and his parents know that.

Dover is the heir to the throne of Ceresh. Being a merman is very difficult for him especially when Elan's parents want to have war with his home. Dover and Elan are close friends and don't want to break that bond.The shapeshifter Faust has been kicked out of the village in Courthaven. He's been considered a 'warlock' in other terms, he's considered a threat. He is always alone and is an outcast. He feels as if no one loves him.Elan, Dover, and Faust have tons of trouble in their hands, the world is spinning, Elan's parents want to kill, and this new world Elan discovers may be paradise to the three of them. But is a threat to everyone else.

We Love Books Review

Rate out of 10: 6.0

What we thought of your book: I know you already know this, but I'm just reminding you. It needs some work, editing is key. It also reads rush. It can get a bit confusing at some parts, because of It. You have no descriptions of the setting or what the characters are feelings. I recommend going back and go through your chapters and read them yourself. Edit the things you see and add things you think needs to be added. Chapter five was probably the best chapter I read out of the seven. So, by the looks of it I believe that you have a good book here. It just needs work.

Rate out of 100%: 60%