The Evil Gilbert
Author: maddyc6115
Genre: Fantasy
Summary: Hayley Gilbert... the dark side of Elena Gilbert. Hayley is Elena's twin sister. two men fighting over her. Damon Salvatore and Tyler Lockwood. who will she choose? love lust and pain.
We Love Books Review
Rate out of 10: 5.9
What we thought of your book: Let's start with your begging chapter it's all cramp in one long paragraph. I suggest separating the dialogues from your description. Go back through your chapters and try to fix the obvious mistakes. I did notice your writing gets better over the chapters. Your doing a great job! Keep writing.
Rate out of 100%:59%
