It's My Dad Review

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It's My Dad

Author: The-Pretty-Potato12

Genre: Teen Fiction

Summary: Hi, I'm Ruby Winter and this is my story. I have a lot of secrets, some are funny, some are just normal and some give me nightmares. Solve this riddle and you'll know my secret: You can't see it in my eyes. I forever shall deny. Objects going up and down. This turned my world around. I'm not a genius. It's just my brain.

We Love Books Review

Rate out of 10: 7.6

What we thought of your book: You have a great story here, very fun to read. I just like there friendly way with each other. I like how you connect them by her father. Its pretty neat how you added her power in the story. I do suggest going back a separating your dialogues and paragraphs​from each other. Good job and keep writing!

Rate out of 100%: 76%

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