The Dragon
Author:Moon_Dancer_Kid
Genre: Fantasy
Summary: Ashley Myron is just your average 15 year old girl. She loves music and dancing. She has lots of friends. Her family is a happy one and her older brother is on the football team. The only thing that sets her apart from every other 15 year old girl, is the fact that she's part dragon.
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Rate out of 10: 7.2
What we thought of your book: What I first notice was the clump paragraphs in your chapters. I recommend separating your dialogues from your paragraphs. It will make it more easier to read and comprehend. I aslo recommend going back and add more descriptions and history in your book. Getting to know more about your characters and how they are who they are. Interesting plot and story! Keep writing!
Rate out of 100%: 72%
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