Element
Author: ChandlerHinton
Genre: Fantasy
Summary: The Crown, The Throne, The System. They've all made their marks on our world. Our way of life is cracking, not even the Monarchy can seal those cracks. Every day, every battle, the Monarchy loses their grip on the Crown, one day they'll slip. One day, and I'll be ready. My ability to control things like fire and electricity, makes me less of a person to the Throne, and more like an asset. I'm just a pawn on a bigger chessboard. A storm called Revolution is brewing, and it's going to engulf us all.
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Rate out of 10: 8.0
What we thought of your book: I first notice the nice humor you add with his consiousness. I really commend your writing in the first chapter. It's very eye catching and well written chapter. I also feel like there's something missing from your following chapter. Yes, you do keep the reader entertain and interested, but there's just that spark that's missing. Go back and just read through your chapters all the way through if you think there's nothing missing from your story, there's nothing missing from your story. It's your story, so write it how you want to write it! Keep writing!
Rate out of 100%: 80%
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