the girls that changed the heart of others #wattys2017 (Editing)

finally out

Sasuke pov

I was walking around the village when madra came up to me. I got in a battle stance.

"calm down my dear nephew"he said

"why should I you sent me here like i deserve it now tell me how to go home"

"why don't you just defeat me"with that he vanished

"defeat him"i stood there when it hit me

I ran toward the others.

"guys......i........have.............a........ Way........ To........ Leave"i said gasping for air

"what is it sasuke"kasai asked

"we have to defeat him"

"where would he be"

Then an explosion happened .

"probably there"i said

We ran towards the explosion. As we ran kasai had summoned two katanas. Sakura's diamond spead. Etc. We reached the place.

"madara"i said

"so you came huh"he said

"let's just get this done"kasai said

Kasai pov

I jumped at madara and teleported behind them and my katanas. I cut him on the back. Hey i made it in the bingo book as a s-rank.

Rasagidori

I put it in his chest and he went flying into a wall. He passed out but we seen a possessed menma.

"i got this"naruto said

"ok but first sign of you almost dying I'm coming in"hinata said

"ok"with that he jumped in

Naruto pov

I was able to summon kurama and was currently riding him.

Rasangan

I jumped off kurama and flew towards menma. I hit I'm in the chest.

"is that all you got"he said

I was starting to feel weak like i was drained of my chakra. I hit the ground.

Hinata pov

"NARUTO"i yelled

I jumped down and stood in front of him.

"you really think you can defeat me"menma said

I got in a battle stance. He came at me.

Eight trigram 64palm

2 palm

4 palm

8 palm

16 palm

32 palm

64 palm

I hit him on all points of chakra and he passed out. I turned to naruto.

"naruto are you ok"i asked

"yea but hinata you did it"he said

"yea I did"

Everyone came running towards me and gave me a hug.

"I'm so proud of you"neji-niisan said

"you kick ass"tenten yelled

"nice job"kasai said

"good work"kiba said

"i knew you had it in you"sakura said

"i can't believe you were able to defeat him"sasuke said

"that was awesome"shikamaru said

"this calls for a celebration once we get back"ino yelled
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Yassssss yassssssss i just made hinata do that

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