Hey guys, so this isn't an update (since this story is complete already), but I have a few questions for you guys.
So, I really enjoy writing plotty, angsty stories in case some of you had not realized. I am beginning to write fiction for fandoms that are typically hard to write for. Maybe some of you have noticed, but I am currently writing a BirdFlash (Dick Grayson/Wally West) fic, as well as a Jason Todd fic, which are both comic based. The reason why I need this feedback is because it is typically tough to write a comic fic without it being cringey to some extent.
So, all I'm asking is, based on this fic, or other ones of mine that you may have read, do you think my writing is cringey/bad in any way?
I know there is no 'perfect' author, but I really would like honest feedback if any of you are willing to give it.
Thank you :) - Jessie
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The Purge (Brendon Urie)
Fanfiction"This is your Emergency Broadcast System announcing the commencement of the Annual Purge. At the siren, all crime, including murder, will be legal for 12 hours. All emergency services will be suspended. Your government thanks you for your participat...