EVERYTHING WRONG WITH: MY IMMORTAL
IN 5 PARTS
SPOILERS!
(DUH)
WARNING
Publisher's Note: I am not Tara, (the creator of this 'story') I am just a crazy teenage girl with nothing better to do, and wished to return the LOL's to the internet. I am in no way associated with the author of this story, and are merely republishing it exactly as it was (hacker-chapter and all). Finally, address all flames to Tara, (on fanfiction.net) not to me. Oh, and since Tara never put up disclaimers, I shall do one: I do not own Harry Potter, and neither (thank goodness) does the real author of this story.
Ah, My Immortal. How long I have waited to sin this story and do all the little dings whenever I find something wrong with it. I think I will very much enjoy doing that.
Well the truth is, you can't fault a classic, and My Immortal most certainly is a classic. So there will be no sins for this book! It literally is perfect.
STORY SIN TALLY: 0
SENTENCE: Votes on Every Chapter and a Place in the Library of Congress
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I am of course joking. Did you really think I was going to give a free pass to My Immortal? Or did you remember that no story is without sin? Ha! Look out for my comments in the coming chapters. They will tell you Everything Wrong With My Immortal.
Warning: Do not read this story if you are any sort of Grammar Nazi because your head WILL immediately explode. This is just for laughs, and to post this on Wattpad since it isn't on here yet. If you have an ammunity to stories that are even slightly bad, please for your mental health, do not read on. You have been warned.
Author misspells 'immunity' while attempting to warn us about bad spelling. *Ding!*
Chapter 1
AN: Special fangz (get it, coz Im goffik) 2 my gf (ew not in that way) raven, bloodytearz666 4 helpin me wif da story and spelling. U rok! Justin ur da luv of my deprzzing life u rok 2! MCR ROX!
Bloodytearz666, Worst. Proof-reader. EVER. *Ding!*
Hi my name is Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way and I have long ebony black hair (that's how I got my name) with purple streaks and red tips that reaches my mid-back and icy blue eyes like limpid tears and a lot of people tell me I look like Amy Lee (AN: if u don't know who she is get da hell out of here!).
Why put an apostrophe in 'Darkness'? there anyway? Someone might choke on it while trying to pronounce Ebony's extremely unwieldy sequence of names. Do you want that to happen? *Ding!*
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Everything Wrong With: My Immortal
RandomMy Immortal: widely regarded as the worst piece of fanfiction ever written, EVER! But we here at StorySins weren't happy with that assumption, and so we decided to test it! Here are the results. No spelling mistake goes unpunished. No assault to the...
