Before I finish up chapter Thirty: Chaos in the Base, I've reread my entire fic, and I'm having doubts.
Is Sylviana too much of a Mary Sue?
Should I redo the Alabasta arc?
Are there any scenes that need a rewrite?
And, comparing the beginning to now, I feel like the story's less...energetic? Humorous?
It's getting less and less sudden moments, surprise, and those scenes that are just so--for lack of a better term--One Piece.
So basically, even if it's all planned out in my head, I would like some ideas? Privately, please, or it won't be much of a surprise to other readers.
And an unrelated question:
If the creator of a franchise (for example, Oda) has a head canon, does that make it canon?
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Guardian of the Destined (As You Wish)
Fiksi PenggemarThe pirates gaped, their Captain grinned, she burst out laughing, the song of wind chimes in her wake. REWRITE IS UP! I own nothing but the changes in plot, my OCs, and any false or made-up information. Begins in Alabasta Arc You must have knowledge...
