Well, I swear that this is my honest option in your book and I don't believe in unnecessary burning so, erm, you're safe. Also if your book is based on any kind of show...please do tell me as I am not really a tv kind of person
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Title: Tomorrow's world Author: Tarlotta Camilia Genre:Random
WTH.I don't even know what's this crap (actually to call it crap is already very good.WHAT IN THE WORLD IS THIS?!) Why am I even reviewing this.Okay whatever.Here goes nothing.
SUMMARY
3 assholes that will be not popular tomorrow.
YOUR COVER PAGE.
Lemons.Seriously?!Lemons.I give up.I felt so bad for your cover page.Here, here's one that you can use.
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I didn't put in a lot of effort tho as I could see that you don't really care how your own cover looks so why bother?
Also can I say something? THIS.IS.THE.WORST.COVER.EVER. What has lemons gotta do with popularity?! Please.Omg please next time you want a cover, go to a cover store.
Cover page score -1/10
YOUR STORY. Grammar? Even a five year old can do better.Please tell me you're five or I'll cry for your school....wha- "I is popular" Protagonist dear, you're a bimbo. It is "I am popular"
Also the plot seems cliche and your paragraph was...ahhh no point saying.
One word to describe your whole story: Horrible.
Advice:
Delete your book!Just delete it.Humankind will save its dignity. I'm sorry but this is the closest to hopeless I've seen so far. Congrats.
Please read more books on Wattpad to help your writing skills kay? Hire an editor or something.
Would I RECOMMEND your book?
Dream.on.if I don't insult it is already a miracle.
Your score.
I know I said I won't be too harsh but... you got a ....
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NEGATIVE SIX YAY!
Hope you figure something out and please delete your book.
