Amen's Desire and Other Stories

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                               Author: JordanBraymen

                                         Summary: Emin London had always been taught to be a good boy. Cross your t's, dot your i's, make sure your hands are folded like so. But that all is shattered as Grayson, the local troublemaker, sweeps him up into a world of confusion. Will Emin fall for this bad boy? Or will Grayson be left in the dust? Along with this book is accompanied with many other short stories, sure to evoke emotions of all kinds. From scandalous office affairs to heart-breaking romances, your sure to find something you like. So what are you waiting for?
                                       Other Information: There are trigger warnings at the beginning of each short story.
      
                                         This story is incomplete as so I will be review parts 1-23.

                                      Amen's Desire Review: Emin is a pastor's son and just like many others expected to become a pastor.  His father is not overbearing but has expectations. The father is not describe as an living god which was one of my first likes. Also Emin is a normal teenager. The writing was not the best in the first chapter. Then the story progressed and the writing got better. The meeting of Grayson and what happens is rushed. The feelings that Emin and Grayson come feel for each other happens only in the first time meeting. Later in the third chapter Emin is still thinking about Grayson. This would be normal because of something happening and him thinking about it. But it was the first day and later the story is still influenced by Grayson but he is not there. Still on the same line of thought Emin still wants a connection with Grayson. I would like to have more interaction between Emin and Grayson so we get were this feelings are coming from. Overall this story still is incomplete so this issue could be fixed. Also it is a great story the romance is cute what bit we did have. Then there's Emin sexuality and how he's parent deal with it  and his self. This is a  MxM story.
           
                                   Other Stories Review: Writing in these short stories are great. The endings leave you wanting more. The format of  the stories do change. Most of the stories deal with darker themes. These themes are done in a way that leaves the reader thinking oh god that's awful to I want more. Also attachments are made to characters that you never see again. The stories are MxM and GxG. (I don't give a fuck but others do so)
           
                                 Rating: 5 stars

  
  

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