Trapped in Despair

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Author: Yupphire

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Author: Yupphire

Summary: Magicians are not a fantasy in my world. They are a part of our daily life. Some of them are really cool and do good things. Some are very bad. I don't want to talk about them. I've heard stories of a world without magic. It must sound very boring. But it also sounds very safe. There are times when I wished I wasn't a magician warrior. I wish that I could just live a normal life without being ridiculed, tortured, or hated. Sometimes I wished I was in that world without magicians. But magician or not, I just want to be free. Maybe destiny will be merciful.

Star Rating: ⚫⚫◾

The parts I reviewed were parts 1- 13 seeing as this book is incomplete.

Review: The summary was confusing enough for me then there's the story. Then the main character has so much inter dialogue that the story has no descriptions or anything about the other characters than names. Also the main character knew the thoughts of others without any knowledge. Again to the inter dialogue it was so much that a paragraph would be thoughts then we would be transported to another place. In that new we place wouldn't know where we were because no descriptions. Now more on the line of the fire in chapter six. There is a fire outside of Yuki window and Akira just runs out. Then Yuki precedes to think that she ran out because of the fire. How did she know there was no dialogue between characters. Also where are the descriptions to where Yuki went to Akira. Then a death happens and later do many other most seem for shock. No emotion are felt for these dead characters because we know nothing about them. Then love is in air but where the fuck did it come from. Yuki confessions her love to a friend but why there is nothing there to have a relationship with. One thing that did strike me as odd the fire was an attack but nobody went after the people that did the attack. Just throughout the whole book I didn't know where I was. Overall all those things together made the story a 2 1/2 star rated book.

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