critical || suho ✔

ch. 18

(Warning: kinky af)

"Who are you texting?" Suho asked curiously, slyly taking your hand back and placing it on his thigh.

"Just someone who needs to shut the fuck up" You shrugged and slipped the phone back into your pocket. "I just was telling him to piss off because I'm with my daddy" You looked over to a smug Suho and poked his cheek.

"Mmm, guess we will have to show him that you have something better to do~" He placed his hand on top of yours and played with your fingers, pulling up to the Hotel doors. A boy who looked to be a little older than you opened your door, while another got into the drivers seat after Suho.

"Wow... this is fancy" Your eyes grew wide, Suho holding your hand as he pulled you inside.

"Maybe if I'm lucky, it will be ours one day instead of just mine" He smiled at you, pressing the button to the elevator.

"Stop I'm going to blush" You both stepped into the elevator. Pressing the 20th floor, before bringing you into his chest. Your hands clutched onto his leather jacket, your face burying into his grey t-shirt.

He smiled, looking at the elevator doors as they opened to his pent house. "Welcome home~"

"Oh so I live here now?" He bit his lip and pulled you against him again.

"You will soon baby girl, daddy is going to take real good care of you" In the next second, Suho smashed his lips against yours. You smiled into the kiss and wrapped your arms around his neck, bringing your bodies closer.

He broke apart, starting to kiss down your jaw. "Suho~" He groaned, his hand roaming down your back.

"I guess we're skipping dinner and the movie?" He smirked against your neck, nibbling on a small hicky he just made.

"We can re arrange the order~" you breathed, bringing his lips back against yours. He squeezed the back of your thighs before picking you up. Your legs wrapped around his waist.

"I like the sound of that" He walked to the stairs as you sucked harshly on his neck, he hissed enjoying the pleasure he got from it.

Throwing you down on the bed, Suho smiled. He slid off his leather jacket, discarding it across the room. His shirt was the next item he took off. You gazed up at his toned abs, you sat on the edge of the bed, Suho standing between your legs.

"I've been waiting to see these up close~" Your finger traced the tight muscles. "I've also been wanting to see you all sweaty~" He smirked at you once again, bringing his head level with yours.

"Tonight is about making your dreams come true baby girl" He pulled you up, his hands taking off all your items of clothing leaving you bare infront of him. "I wasn't lying when I said you were a goddess" He took off his jeans, hands roaming your sides.

"God damn Suho don't tease me, please just-" Before you could finish, Suho smacked your thigh.

"It's daddy tonight" He growled, his hand massaging the area he smacked. "Disobey and you'll be punished. Understood?"

"Y-yes" He smacked the same place again, his eyebrow raising. "Yes daddy" He nodded, enjoying the words that rolled off your tongue.

"I'll spare you tonight being as I've waited with your teasing." His lips traced kisses along you neck, your eyes looking at Suho's body. He reached over to his bedside table, pulling out a condom. He slid it on and looked at you again.

His fingers rubbed you gently before he inserted one of his fingers. You eyes shut tightly, a moan escaping your lips. "So wet baby girl~" He skillfully added a second finger, curling them slightly to give you more pleasure.

"Suho! Daddy Suho please!" Your back arched, your pleading sounded like a beautiful song to Suho.

"As you wish baby girl" He kissed your lips one last time before plunging into you. You bit your lip in pain, nails digging into his biceps. "Shhh, it won't hurt for long baby" He said softly, slowly moving in and out so that your pain would subside.

"Daddy~" you moaned gently, your legs wrapped around his torso. "More.."

Without a second thought Suho roughly started to fuck you into the bed. "God you're so tight!" He mumbled, his head going into the crook of your neck. He whispered dirty things to you as you both came close.

"Daddy! I'm close..." You moaned, Suho only grunted, his thrusts becoming sloppy. You came, back arching in pleasure as you bit your lip.

"Baby girl~" He moaned, coming soon after.

You both laid in the covers panting softly. You smiled into his chest, your hand resting on his abs. "That was better than I had expected."

"Did you expect it to be bad?" His arms were wrapped around you tightly, making sure he knew this wasn't a dream.

"No, I knew it would be amazing... But this was more than amazing" He laughed and smiled genuinely.

"Good thing the night isn't over. It's still your birthday for another half am hour... how about we go cuddle? Get to know each other even better."

"I'd love that... Suho"

A/n:

HOLY FRICK. THIS IS LATE I'M SORRY. I GOT ADDICTED TO MYSTIC MESSENGER AND OTHER GAMES AND YEAH....

BUT I PROMISED SMUT.

DRAMA STARTS SOON...

YE.