So I read a couple of chapters of this story and I feel like it's absolutely awful so I'm going to apologise for that, it was my first fan fic but that doesn't excuse anything I might re-do the first few chapters and make it less carroty, and make sure it actually makes sense and doesn't contradict itself, I also realised that the story and the ziall relationship happens really quickly so I will maybe lengthen the time period in which all of this happens (so making the ziall relationship happen in chapter 15 or something)
I may re-write most of it and make it into a new story but with the same plot and i'll just delete this one once it's reached the same amount of reads/votes. It might also be re-named because I don't really like this story.
