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My Brother's Best Friend

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My Brother's Best Friend by Ida_e_D2
Genre: Short Story

Summary:

Kenna gets to spend the whole summer alone with her brother at their house in Miami City, Florida! She's so exited for summer but what happens when Kenna starts to fall for her brother's best friend?

Cover (4/5) - I really like the picture with the boy and the girl in the water, but it's not all that eye-catching.

Plot (7/10) - Starts off super telly (meaning you just narrate the story). Try to show us what's happening through dialogue or actions instead of just telling us what's happening. Other than that I really like the story.

Originality (7/10) - The "falling for someone off limits" is a very over used cliche. But I like how instead of doing the best friend's brother thing, you put your own twist on it and made it a brother's best friend thing.

Format (5/5)

Spelling/Punctuation (4/5) - A few spelling errors, but nothing too bad.

Grammar (3/5) - There's quite a few grammar errors, but it's not so many that you can't enjoy the story.

Overall, I liked the story. I like the idea and the execution. There are a few things that I would go back and edit, but nothing really serious or too bad. (Although, how do you pronounce Django? 😂)