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Redemption

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Redemption by Rosephilips
Genre: Science Fiction

Summary:

Caught in the middle of a fight that could doom the world, Rose struggles with the truth of what she learns.

What exactly does it mean to be a "Chosen One"?

Cover (5/5) - I really like the rose picture to symbolize Rose.

Plot (9/10) - I really like the idea of the "Chosen One" and the four men and everything. I think the first chapter progressed a little fast, and it's kind of confusing. But otherwise the plot is pretty good.

Originality (10/10) - One thing I like about science fiction is that it's usually so original. I love the idea and how you executed it.

Format (5/5)

Spelling/Punctuation (3/5) - There were a lot of punctuation errors with the dialogue. There were also a few capitalization errors and a couple spelling errors, but those weren't too bad.

Grammar (4/5) - A few grammar errors, but nothing too serious.

Overall, I really like the story. My one note would be to go back and edit your story to fix the spelling, punctuation, and grammar errors. Other than that, it's a pretty good story. Keep writing it. It's really good.

Rosephilips, sorry for the late review. I had a few others to do before yours. Sorry! (: