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Tremendous Ten and the Missing Piece of History

Tremendous Ten and the Missing Piece of History by Niranju98 and archana95.
Genre: Fantasy

Summary:

Cathy Wilde, a 15-year-old girl leading a normal life, suddenly experiences some weird happenings in a day. She is more terrified when two strangers appear in her house out of nowhere. She learns that she has powers. Then she follows them to a world known as Illusia.

In Illusia she gets training to control her powers in the Elite Academy. She tries her best to adapt there. She gets to know that someone has been sponsoring her the whole time at the Academy. Soon enough her secret sponsor is revealed that shocks her to the core.

In the meantime, something strange is happening in that Academy, something that relates to the recent past which leaves the Academy in grave danger. She and nine of her friends discover the hidden truths behind the history.

Tremendous Ten are up to something for which they are not completely trained yet. Will the ten of them be able to stop it or will the devastation take place? Does that danger relate only to the Academy or the whole of Illusia?

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Cover (4/5) - I really like the picture of Cathy's powers with the plants. My only suggestion would be to make the text on the cover a different color from the background. They're both green, so it makes it a little confusing.

Plot (9/10) - A little telly, but not too bad. I like how in the beginning you show a little bit of Cathy's powers before she truly knows what's going on.

Originality (10/10) - Something I like about fantasy books are that they're usually pretty original. Groups of heroes are kind of cliche, but I've never seen a group as big as ten. I like all of the different characters you added to the mix.

Format (5/5)

Spelling/Punctuation (4/5) - There were a few missing commas and things like that, but overall it was pretty good.

Grammar (4/5) - There were a few grammatical errors, but again, there was nothing too bad.

Overall, I think the story was pretty good. I really liked the whole thing about Cathy finding her powers and the Tremendous Ten.

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Niranju98, sorry for the really late review! I've been swamped with schoolwork and color guard. Sorry!