Before we begin this commentary, I'd like you to know this fanfic is somewhat like My Immortal (I may or may not write a commentary of it), with a Twilight twist. It's a retelling of Twilight where the main character isn't Bella Swan, but an OC.
Oh, just a few notes before we start, 'cause I've got some stuff to tell you:
-This is the first thing I'm uploading to Wattpad.
-I didn't write this fic, someone else did. So, wonderful person who wrote this fanfic, I give you my credits and thanks~ 🙏
-This fanfic has really horrid abuses against the English language, that'll cause brain damage to the reader and make any grammar nazi and English teacher scream for their lives. Please read this nightmare at your own risk, if you dare! Cause it's a MONSTROSITY!!! 😫 And it's also got MARY SUES in it!!! Also, the plot's really BAD!!! OMG, WHAT AM I GONNA DO?!! *angst intensifies*
-We are not responsible for any bad stuff that may happen to you, dear readers, like accidents, hangovers, etc. So if you get sent to the hospital, someone's gonna pay the hospital bill! And you'll be sorry with what you just read! BOO HOO HOO! *evil laugh intensifies* 😈 (see note number 3)
-Commentaries will be in brackets and have MNs next to them. What does MN mean? Of course, darlings, Milcah's Notes! 'Cause my name's Milcah, not something else.
-You can read the original fanfic here, free of commentaries: https://m.fanfiction.net/s/11817026/1/Twila-The-Girl-Who-Waz-In-Luv-With-A-Vampyre
-Last and not least, AAAARRRRGGGH! (insert Spear of Justice here)
-Edit: It updates daily or otherwise.
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Twila The Girl Who Waz In Luv With A Vampyre (with commentary!)
FanfictionThe eldritch 14-chapter horror that is "Twila The Girl Who Waz In Luv With A Vampyre," has now been brought to Wattpad's shores for the first time all the way from Fanfiction.net's silliness, with a special commentary written by yours truly! EDIT: S...
