I finished this up last night, and I'm actually p happy with it!
I think I should stop trying to stick to one style and just..draw, you know? I've been trying to refine this one way of drawing for the past year, but when I let go and just draw for the sake of drawing, draw for the sake of making it look the way I want it to look rather than look the way my "art style" looks, it actually usually turns out better..
I don't know. I'll work on that.