Hey there lovelies 👋
Thank you for being brave enough to still read this story, despite it being so poorly written. But the fact that you fought through makes you real heroes ;D
I was reading through it previously, and I noticed that one scene was spread out across around 3 chapters. Which tends to get boring and overly repetitive. So, I decided that I want to try and rewrite the story to make sure that those reading are not bored by the over exaggerations.
This would actually be the second time I rewrite this story, seeing as there is an older version that I only shared with my friend. That version is even more poorly written (yes, somehow it is possible to be worse) but the scenes in the chapters are short.
This means that I have more chapters that go over more scenes, but they are poorly written and might be kind of annoying to read (I wrote it when I was 13, I think, so please, be patient with me).
But I believe, probably, my writing has improved... kind of... so I thought I'd take another shot at writing it because for this story there are a lot of concepts and I do plan on making this a part of a series of books.
But anyway, my point is, if you guys somehow found the storyline entertaining, by some chance, I would be more than happy - well, not that happy but I'll sum up the courage to do it - to upload the old version so that you guys can read on the scenes. Of course, this would mean that there would be a ton of spoilers, (a ton is an over exaggeration) for the rewritten version and it might not be as enjoyable to read if the context isn't well written.
But I would really love to hear, or read, what you guys think! If you want me to upload it or not.
I would also like to hear what you guys think of my current writing, and I am more than happy to accept criticism, systematic criticism, please don't break my heart I put a lot of effort into this! But at least some points as I really want to improve my writing.
Also, I already written a first part for the rewritten version of the rewritten version... if that makes sense... and I'm just deciding on whether to post the new or the old version.
Anyway, I gtg, so have a lovely day (or night, whatever your timezone is) guys! :D
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Darkened
Science FictionEver since I was a little child, I've dreamed of a better world. I look around me now to only find chaos... As I walk down the empty street, I think of what could be. What could be if only we had treated this world right? I walk as my heavy boots st...
