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Name Pinkear

This name certainly is unique

Age 15 moons

good

Appearance a pale pink skinned She cat with white fur and ruby eyes she is an albino her pelt is short and curled 

Wow! An albino cat those are and most people don't have them as OC's

Gender she cat

good

Personality: Pinkear is a quiet confident tunneler she doesn't trust her poor eyes sight she is trusting of her fellow tunnelers

Nice

Strength her hearing and sense of smell

Okay, it corresponds with her personality so that's good

Weakness her poor eye sight 

Still corresponds

Flaws being an albino has lead to her having poor sight that grew worse of she is out in the snow for too long due to the sun reflecting off the snow and into her eyes

Good it still fits

Backstory Pinkear and her siblings were born too early and weak very weak barely surviving leaf bare. She and her siblings waited and extra moon before becoming an apprentice. Her mother Daisypelt was disappointed when Pinkear became a tunneler. Pinkear had a Normal Appreciateship and became a warrior alone with her brother and sisters.

Okay. 

Death she died in a collapsed tunnel

Makes sense

Overall she is a very basic character and probably could use more development but everything fits together well

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⏰ Last updated: Nov 17, 2017 ⏰

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