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First piece of work in 2018. Definitely feels fresh in a good way. I may or may not actually do my light novelish piece-I've got an idea but it's still in pieces currently. One thing I did promise is the HiroMido story--I'm trying my best, okay? And let's start with a little piece of what's on my mind.

To be completely honest, Wattpad actually helped hone my writing skills, especially my first person viewpoints. (I'm more of a "third person" kind of guy) And the fact that both of my Chinese and English writing exams require me to write a first-person story. And I actually managed to ace it thanks to all of my writing. Got to thank wattpad for that, eh?

(Rant)And also, when browsing through wattpad to read fanfictions of my pairings, I do notice that many of those-I'm not going to name anything-just don't have the feel to them. Just something feels a bit wrong. Perhaps it's the vocabulary or the grammar used-or simply the writing technique-many of those high-view fanfictions have nice plot, but their writing just kinds of hurt me. It just kind of feels different.

On the other hand, I've been reading this incredibly good LeoKumi piece on AO3, and the author's writing is just.... I can't describe how fucking good it is,The plot, the characters, the execution, even the lore-everything is just perfect to a point I can't critize. One thing I can do is fanboy though-Kudos to the author. 

Just recently I also picked up the Go strikers 2013 game which I have abandoned for more than half a year and it's still so brilliant-kind of reminds me how I got into the fandom in the first place, far before my fanboy times-No gay, No shippings, just the simple love of football, eh? I'm sure I'll be first in line for the new I11 game coming this summer.

So, back to the story itself. As I believe, the last storyline chapter was the confession. I would like to mark that as the end of part one- part two now will feature more of their romantic interactions. Also, the 2k special R18 is directly linked to the storyline and takes place, well, after the previous one and before this one. 

And that was 400 words of crap (basically, now that this story is rated mature, I can know swear here--). Now back to our scheduled programme~~

(Suzuno P.O.V)

I woke up this morning with Nagumo next to me.

Nagumo...? What is he doing? And on my bed? 

Oh right... That happened last night...

What would other people think of us? 

We might not care about all of the morally incorrect parts of this relationship, but everyone else most certainly would! Especially considering our positions and all-I simply can't imagine how the rest of Alius would react. 

We're disgusting, aren't we? Engaging in such kind of behaviour, one that we're definitely not supposed to- I'm even more disgusting, not being able to resist his love-knowing that it's wrong, but still falling for him, into his deep embrace--

Yep. Pathetic, I surely am.

But looking over at Nagumo, who's still in his slumber, drooling a little bit from the tip of his mouth-but every aspect of him just makes him impossible to resist. The gods can smite me where I sit, but god, I simply can't resist him.

But even so, how do we explain it to others? Or do we keep it secret? We can't pretend that the love between us doesn't exist at all-then what's the point of being together in the first place?

A knock on the door. What nice timing.

"Who's there?" I walked to the door, careful not to wake up Nagumo. God knows if he'd start shouting if he woke up finding that he's in my bed.

"As the captain of Gaia, I demand entry into your room, right now."

Gran? Why the hell is he here? What if he found out? We'd be so fucked!

"Let him in, Suzuno," I heard Nagumo from behind me. "He knows everything."


~~~~~~~

"I guess I owe you a proper introduction. Call me Hiroto, and this is my gir- I mean, boyfriend Midorikawa," the redhead, who's now also sitting on our bed. Sitting next to him was Reize-or Midorikawa, with his hair let free, making him harder to recognise. 

"Nagumo must have kept you in the dark," Midorikawa piped up, looking at me. "So basically, my hubby has been playing playmaker the entire time. Or did you honestly think that the very beautiful heart-shaped doorway was a work of nature?"

"And I assume the rock is too, eh? You two, you filthy bastards..." 

"Don't think of us like that, Nagumo. The rock was very strategical and played a major role in the success of the entire matchmaking project. In fact, I regard it as my biggest tactical success. Moreover, didn't both of you enjoy it, a lot?" Hiroto smiled, ruffling his hands through his hair.

"You sure did, didn't you?" Midorikawa smirked. "Also, darling, look where you're sitting on."

Hiroto looked down at where he's sitting and noticed a blood spot on the bed. How did that even get there? Did we kill something last night or what?

"Ah, I see. Not like that we didn't already know what happened because of the cameras--" his voice faltered with the latter part of the sentence.

"Wait, what cameras?" I asked.

"Not that you should know of," Hiroto said. "Anyways, we're here to congratulate you on your relationship,"

"Wait, how the hell did you know?"

"Ehh.. we guessed," Midorikawa now seems a little bit frantic.  "The main point is,we want to invite you to come on a double date with us this Saturday. You've got nothing to do, right?"

I looked at Burn, as I definitely feel at least a little bit suspicious. 

"Yeah, sure, we'll go."

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

(Hiroto P.O.V)

"You almost screwed up real bad back there," Midorikawa sighed, now back in our room, lying on our bed. 

"Are you seriously inviting them to go on a double date, though? You know, I had plans for Saturday." I said, taking out my notebook and erasing whatever was on the page for that day.

"It's not like I don't know what you're planning, you kink."


Jesus, it's really late here already.. I need to go to sleep.

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