chapter 21 turnup

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recap: Tobias is going to Propose..

Tobias POV

It's 5:45 and I'm making my way to the net. 15 more minutes.  15 more minutes until I propose.  15 minutes until Tris is mine forever. 15 minutes until the rest of my life. Atleast I hope. Oh God,  what if she says no? I don't know how I could ever deal with that.

I make it to the net at 5:53. My mind races with thoughts like "what if she says no?" and "will she says yes?". I look at my watch every minute. I just can't wait any longer. I dressed up nicely. I'm wearing an all black suit and a white shirt and black tie. I don't think I've ever been this fancy, ever.

I look at my watch and see its 6:00 o'clock. She should be here soon. I wait a couple more minutes and she still hasn't arrived. Maybe she's just late.

I wait ten more minutes and she still hasn't arrived. A million questions race through my mind. Is she okay? Did she stand me up? Did someone hurt her? Then I hear it.. I hear Tris's scream and chills run through my body...

TRIS POV

Its 5:50 when I start to walk to the net. I'm almost there and I'm getting butterflies just thinking of Tobias.  I turn a corner and feel a sharp pain on my head and everything goes black...

I wake up and everything is spinning.  I heat voices but everything is fuzzy and muffled. Then everything is black again...

I wake up to someone,  a man, saying "finally, Stiff, you've been asleep for like ever,". Who is that? Eric? Peter?

"let me go, " I say. I try to say it strongly, but my voice shakes with fear. What are they going to do to me? Before they can reply, everything is black again...

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