@jonaxx (Part 2)

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Costa Leona Series #6

24. Sands of Time - Raoul Vesarius Riego and Soleil Sierra Cervantes. I finished reading this tonight, January 31, 2017, 11:20 pm. Inihiwalay ko rin dahil gusto kong ilabas lahat ng nararamdaman ko tungkol dito.

Dito, nakita ko na nag-improve talaga si @jonaxx . Magaling na siya noon, mas lalo pang gumaling ngayon! Noon, magaling na siya sa pagiging consistent ng characters at pagiging firm ng personality nu'n sa isang kwento. Naipapahatid niya yung emosyon na dapat maramdaman na para bang ako mismo yung nasa mismong scene. Pero ngayon, TAGOS NA TAGOS LALO ANG BAWAT SALITA. Bawat kabanata, may iniiwang aral. Kahit isang pangungusap o isang salita lang, kayang kayang tusukin yung puso ko. Kayang kaya akong pakiligin, pasayahin o saktan.

Emotional ako ngayon kasi damang dama ko si Leil. Napakagaling nung paraan ng paglalarawan para maipakita at mapatunayan yung character niya. Kitang kita at damang dama kung gaano ka-pure ang puso ng character ni Leil. Kung gaano siya kabait. Kung paano siya magmahal. Si Raoul naman, kahit hindi agad nagsabi ng nararamdaman niya para kay Leil, sa bawat kilos at pag-aalala, naipakita na mahalaga si Leil sa kaniya. Napatunayan na kahit ang itsura niya ay matapang at walang kinatatakutan, gentle pa rin siya sa mga mahal niya.

Bawat eksena na masakit, naging masakit talaga! Nang mawalan si Rao at Felicia. Nang lumayo si Leil. Yung pag-aalala at pag-aalaga sa kaniya ng mag-inang Avila. Lahat tagos sa puso ko. Lahat tumatak sa akin.

Minahal ko ang bawat isa sa kanila na minahal din si Leil. I will never forget how pure her heart is. I will never forget how she became the light because of her kindness and loving personality. She taught me how to see light even with the darkest things or situation. She taught me how to be content and appreciate all the little things I have at the moment. That is why I love her with all my heart!

These are some of the lines from the story that I will never forget:

"It's not perfect but I'm content with everything." - Soleil

"Our days may be bad, but we can still be content with our life." -Soleil

"I will love him and his family this way. The love that understands pain, and will never hurt back. The love that embraces wrath in the hopes to fill a sad heart with joy one day." - Soleil

"Loving my family doesn't mean unloving Leil. And loving Leil does not make my love for my family invalid." - Raoul

Dear ate jonaxx,
Thank you for sharing this with us! You made us feel a lot of emotions with this AMAZING STORY 💘 You are an inspiration! I love you. We all love you. SO MUCH ❤ Pleas keep inspiring us 😘 We support you. ALWAYS.