Ernesto *slow updates during school year*

Chapter 1- The Club

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-Alanna

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I woke up to the truly unsatisying sound of my alarm clock. I had a killer headache, not to compliment my inability to walk in a straight line. Last night was crazy.

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"Are you ready?" Stacey asked. She had been my best friend since 3rd grade. Then, we were both misfits, but now, were going to graduate soon as the most popular girls in school. I grabbed my purse from the car, and pulled up my ultra mini dress. " Yeah, I'm ready."

I slammed the car door as to say "Hello world!" Or more like "Hello Su Lugar!", the name of the club we were at. As we approached the red rope and the humongous bouncers, I flipped my hair and followed Stacey into the club. " Hold on, Miss" one of the bouncers had their hand on my shoulder. "I'm going to need to see some ID." My face blushed in embarrassment. "Um, I don't think I have it around.."

" Then you won't be allowed in the club. I'm sorry ma'am. Back of the line." Stacey ran over and totally saved my butt. "Oh! Dylan! I think you left your wallet in my purse," and she handed both of our fake ID's to the bouncer. " Sorry to waste your time sir." She apologized. "No problem ladies, come right in."

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The club smelled like weed, and I coughed in the smoke. I couldn't really see much between the blunt smoke, the smoke from the smoke machine, and strobe lights. It was so hot because of all the sweat and dancing. Stacey tapped my shoulder and pointed to a guy wearing a Pistons SnapBack. " I think I'm gonna go talk to him!" She yelled over the super loud music. "Yeah! You go! Talk to him!" I smiled and shooed her away.

"Piña Colada please," I wiped my forehead to flick off the sweat. "Comin right up." The bartender looked me up and down. " Party hard,huh?"

"Oh, no. Me? I just got here, but its so hot with all these people." She smirked at me. "Hm. Well this is on the house. You'll be back." She slid the drink across the bar to me and then added a little umbrella into my cup. I sipped away, tapping my toes to the music, swiping off more sweat.

Almost half an hour went by until a guy took the seat next to me. "This can't be. No, no, no. A pretty young thing like you, just simply cannot be sitting by herself."

He looked in my eyes. I have to admit, he was pretty cute. He wore black jeans and a grey button up shirt. From what I could tell, because of the smoke, he had brown hair and green eyes, but all other details were hard to make out. I laughed his comment off. "Aha. Yeah, I guess I am by myself." He tossed a twenty on the table and called the bartender. " Get the lady a pomtini, and I'll just have whiskey, or a scotch. You know the difference."

I looked up at the bartenders name and saw it was Rylee. Rylee laughed and started making the drinks. " I've been watching from the VIP lounge. I'm surprised nobody has scooped you up yet. I mean, just look at you! Gorgeous!" I blushed and smiled, although he probably couldn't see in this dark. "Well, thank you." Rylee set our drinks down on the bar and I drank my second for the night.

I soon learned that the guys name was Jose. We laughed all night, We danced, we drank, then we drank more. We drunkenly sang the lyrics to songs, and we drunkenly got more drunk. "Why don't we go somewhere quieter?" Jose suggested.

He put his hand on my thigh. His speech was slurred and so was mine. I was honestly surprised I hadn't blacked out yet. "Yeah, sure." He held my wrist and dragged me behind the VIP area. "Here we are." He gestured me to sit in this big purple velvet chair that was big enough for 3 obese men to sit in together, but it was still a chair. There was another couple in here, making out, but Jose shooed them out. And there was a lot of, what I presumed, was Jose's friends smoking weed and hookah, but as soon as they saw me enter with him, they laughed and all left together. We were alone, in the weird giant chair. After that we kissed a lot, and then we got to it.

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I lay staring at the ceiling, in my bed with Stacey right over my nose. " Are you okay?" I tried to sit up but my hangover was terrible. "I heard it was a crazy night."

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Okay I know this chapter is very short, I just wanted to get into the swing of things.

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-Alanna

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