TEAM MIKEL
autumn_star VS. forlorn_hope
Aha! The battle of the middle underscores. Haha. Okay, seryoso na. Una sa lahat, gusto ko kayong icongratulate. dalawa. You have produced two great and amazing one-shot stories. They weren't alike and that's a good thing, kase they stand out. Konti pa lang ang nababasa kong one-shot stories but if I have a list ng mga nabasa ko na, these two will be on the near top. You both just proved that oldies love story is the best love story ever!
autumn_star, I liked na nagsimula yung story sa ending or, should I say, latter experience nina Cj and Rake. I know that they are quite a sweet couple pero I kinda imagined it too much and filled in some details na your story should have already provided. Magaganda yung descriptions ng scenes and emotions pero they were not maxed. Kung naexplain pa nang kahit konti pa eh it could have been much better. And the LDR feels is quite missing. But on the positive note, nung nareveal na storytelling pala ang ginagawa; from that moment until the ending...that was beautiful, so beaitiful. Yeah, I smiled at that part and I can hear Ed in my head belting out the chorus of 'All Of The Stars'. Astig lang na you have made that happen.
Kay forlorn_hope, your one-shot really covered a lot of stories. Pakiramdam ko they were poems pieced together to make an original and beautiful story. And quoting Jas, "That was touching." You have started strong and finished stronger. Indeed Louis and Eleanor's love story is worth reading, even if you need to go inside a haunted house. Haha. Their story demands to be read. Gusto ko yung umikot yung story sa journal ni Eleanor, it's cliche pero wala na namang original story eh. Nasa delivery na yun. and you made this story your own. I like the input of poems and dialogues. It felt so real.
I'm really proud of you guys. Wala akong reklamo sa songs kase your story translated them so well. I really really enjoyed this pair. It pains me to choose but...this round goes to forlorn_hope.
*Coach Hope used her steal! autumn_star you are now on #TeamHope! Congratulations.
----
TEAM HOPE
forfatter VS. MissHeartbreaker18
To begin with talagang nahirapan akong mamili sa inyong dalawa! grabe kasi both of you guys are great writers and man, even i was very surprised on how you delivered the stories.. One more point na nagpahirap sa akin is yung writing styles niyo are almost- almost lang naman- the same... so talagang nahirapan ako. Now this choice na ginawa ko is with the help of other coaches. I love you both and you guys are both amazing i hope na hindi ka titigil sa pagsusulat kahit hindi pa kita napili kasi i know that you have a creative mind and passion in writing forfatter, sorry but i've got to go with MissHeartBreaker18
----
TEAM FALL
_thequieter VS. SelfieDemiGod (Backed Out)
For _thequieter
Yours is one fine work of art. It's just a shame na wala kang kalaban because your entry is really competitive. Nailabas mo yung story behind the song in your own little way, and I really loved it. Loneliness/finding Mr. Right can be a worthy villain, lalo na't no one can wait forever. I liked your character and the way she continued to wait for the Superman who'll rescue her and sweep her off her feet kahit antagal na panahon ng hinantay niya. It's satisfying na, in the end, nahanap rin niya yung Superman niya. Her long wait finally payed off. So congratulations once again, and good luck for the next round. :D
