TEAM MIKEL
TheGoodForNothingBoy VS. Chichi_Louise
Wala akong baon na joke para dito. Haha. Tawa na lang xD Pero eto na. Just like the previous pairs, you have done a great job. I actually felt na your stories are related like 'Goodnight' is a prequel to 'Beguiled Fate.' But maybe that is just me. Haha.
Chichi_Louise, I have this mind set na you have this in the bag kase you played with this theme before. Alam mo na ang atake dito and you proved that. I love the connection between the characters lalo na yung pagtravel niya para lang makasama muli ang tunay niyang minamahal. Love is sacrifice at napahanga ako ni Harold for being selfless. But the thing is, there are some piece missing. Parang may nawalang spark sayo from last round. The story is beautiful but it can improve more.
TheGoodForNothingBoy, I first saw the title at naisip.ko agad na ginamit mo yung original title ng song and that is not tolerated here. Pero as I read your story I was like -- woah! Ang astig nito. The lines were like rhythmical, like it was a poem or a play performed on stage. Every scene was felt lalo na yung ending at yung pagbuhos ng ulan. My pluviophile self is showing. Haha. Pero one big concern for me is it was not properly aligned with our theme. I actually imagined them young. Like early 20s. And it was supposed to be oldies love story.
I wish there can be a tie. Pero hindi naman pwede. I liked both stories kase the narration were striking at damang-dama mo. Pero i have to choose and my vote goes to TheGoodForNothingBoy.
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TEAM HOPE
EGStryker VS. ThtsMyMstch (Backed Out)
last one, EGStryker i am not saying this because you're a friend of mine but dude, you are such a great writer like even though you're partner had backed out and you pretty much don't even have to exert any effort on this round because you're already automatically in but you still have reached the top! Congratulations and keep it up #teamHope is very much proud of you!
