Min Yoon-gi ELIMINATIONS RESULT

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DIVISION: SINGULARITY

CATEGORY: MIN YOON-GI

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[ LIST OF JUDGES]

exodaddykokobop

- SweetlyRandom

- yumnamoiz14


[TABULATION OF SCORES]

[TABULATION OF SCORES]

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[ LIST OF PARTICIPANTS ]

ENTRY # 1 Dreams by VMinJinKookie

RATING: 71% [Eliminated]

REVIEWS:

♥ The concept of the story was unique. The chapters were short, which was good. The writing style however was not appealing. The reason is because; the chapters lacked sufficient description and characterization. Overall, it was a quick read and I hope that the author tries to put a little bit more emotions to the characters.

♥ This story was good. I just noticed some grammatical errors and lacks a little in the cover but it is a great book judging for the first seven chapters ^^

♥  Personally, i think that a tad more of description and well delivered narrations would really have helped your book attract more readers. Your main idea for your story is creative and I appreciate that. However, more strong vocabulary was needed and it's better to re-check to abstain from grammatical errors. Good luck out there!


ENTRY # 2 Not A Prince Charming by KabyHsu

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