Kim Seok-Jin ELIMINATIONS RESULTS

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DIVISION: SINGULARITY

CATEGORY: KIM SEOK-JIN

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[ LIST OF JUDGES]

sparklingjin

YahSesanginGirl

SweetlyRandom 

[TABULATION OF SCORES]

[TABULATION OF SCORES]

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[LIST OF ENTRIES]

ENTRY # 1 Broken by NamJinsGurl

Rating: 70% (Eliminated)

Reviews:

♥  In the first seven chapters, there's great drama which drives the plot but the characterization is a bit superficial. The grammar mistakes (typos especially) made the read bumpy and really took away from what could have been a great climax. The cover can be better. I love the poetry, but no detail on what it's about. The plot is not very original so far. I appreciated the effort in trying to be vivid.

♥ The cover is perfect for the story—but the author's name could be a better font/placement. Your emotion is strong and well communicated in the story, it's best strength, but the distinction between characters could be stronger. Definitely at creating tension and cliffhangers, but writing style and skill could be more polished

♥ Grammatical errors and the flow of the story were the only flaws of the story. The story is good and is beautifully written.


ENTRY #2 Blind Love by Shookieillegirl

Rating: 77.5%

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