An introduction to the BTS: Battle of the Best Fanfictions 2018 Team, including the judges in each category. Here, you can find the list of judges and participants.
♥ The Book Cover is quite dull and the Title says it all-- even the blurb is nothing special. I mean, there are so many stories out there with same storyline and characterization. I suggest the author should emphasize everything that was different in her story to catch the attention of the readers. The first chapters are dealing with loss and pain but the execution of emotions are lacking that words pass before my eyes without moving my heart even for a little bit. The tension in the preceding chapters needs to be established too since the plot is about two opposite people. The characters definitely need more soul... and body since the physical descriptions need refining too. The structure is kinda messy too so I suggest the author should take her time to revise and rewrite.
♥ The story is good although the punctuations bothered me. The first chapter was also lacking something and the flow was a little fast. But it's still good tho ^^
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