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DIVISION: SINGULARITY
CATEGORY: JUNG HO-SEOK
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[ LIST OF JUDGES]
- KabyHsu
[TABULATION OF SCORES]
[ LIST OF ENTRIES ]
ENTRY # 1 Paper Hearts by sugaatae
RATING: 72.67%
REVIEWS:
♥ The cover is really beautiful and really relates to the story. There were minimum errors and the story is pleasing to read.
♥ Aside from the grammatical mistakes occasionally found in this story, the description of the atmosphere and the scene is failed to be elaborated wisely. The characters are finely brewed yet the action tags and dialogues lack the taste of characters we usually get from these skills.
♥ The lettering of the Book Cover is good but not the cover itself-- it has no connection to the story. There's some missing link to the story. The other details are kinda confusing but I guess it needs more retouch and some edit on it. The intro of the character was good even though there are not many details but the author managed to flow it well. YoonHee's character was so precise, unlike other stories where the female lead is too girly. The author is not the same as other authors who write what they're doing every day which I hated the most. The way the author describes the MC, you'll know she peculiar character. I love the intro to the plot but the way the story flow... At first, she's in love with Hoseok and then the character goes back to a girly state. The dialogues' relevance is very good. The movement of emotion is kinda repetitive and lacks in responsive content. Add some perspective and imagination to the image. It has too much description but no imagination prospect. The switching of POV is too much. It just that Min Yoongi chapter happen to be Yoonhen pov. The writing is good.
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