avneil- neela version

avneil- neela version part 1

Heya guys I am just like u all and have utmost respect for naamkaran and also a silent reader so hope u all like my version of the story thru Neela ki kahaani!!!

Character

Avani: a singham and straight forward IPS officer who cannot tolerate unjust and loves her family and cares for everyone and also portrays a happy go lucky nature. But really misses her mother Neela and regularly like doctor's pills without fail visits hospital to meet her .

Neil: an enraged person who strives to seek justice for his mother Shweta and also has no trust in law and order, just has harleen as his strength and only family left .

Harleen: Neil's aunt who adopted him just as Shweta died leaving behind a rude and struggling son behind and sacrificed her life only to make him seek his revenge.

Others 

Prakash - Neil's dad

Amrut- Prakash ki maa

Shweta - Neil ki maa

Dayawanti - Avani ki dadi

Ketan - chachu

Diksha -bua

Varsha- ketans wife

Neela- Avani s real mother

Ayesha- Avani s step mom

Nanno as Avani s Nani

Ali as mutual friend of both

Riya as cousin

Amol as bro

Sunheri as Avani ki sub ordinate and friends also sister like relationship

Other will be introduced according to the need

Chapter 1:

Before starting would like to state:

When destiny has planned something than no matter everything falls to its place

It was day time and Avani being Avani was going on the lead to get the case solve, seeing her efficiency no one can say that she is just an officer since 2 yrs and also solved more cases then her experience while following a lead she happened to see a theif snatching a purse and running in her direction and as an alert officer she held of her leg to make theif on to his ground and she held him and after nice lefts and rights she handed him to sunheri for further process and return the purse to owner.

The attitude and pride in her eyes for her uniform was not only noticed by all but respect was also enhanced and applaudingly they showed their gratitude,

Just as she was about to go back to the case and seeing nothing left for the day they started to go back to her apartment her 2 Nd home but just as she was about to leave she felt her phone bussing and after checking her caller ID as Ms.fassionista she cheerfully received the call

Riya: Hello!!! Ms super cop mocking as seniors call out

A: hello to u too ms fashionista

R: kya Yaar Avani Tu na rehne de tujhe pata hai na Hume baat kiye Kitna tym hua 

A: sorry na Yaar janti hu aaj I was going to call you but duty calls cannot avoid

R: as usual u n Ur duty

Tujhe koi fark nhi padta na !? I mean how are you don't u have Ur personal lyf ya Puri lyf criminals and cases to commit Kiya.

A:( she's super angry need to calm her down.. Varna volcano erupt ho Jayega ... Soch Kuch Avani)

Sorry ab ye nhi Hoga vaise ye bata how's Ur designer boutique going on actually I wanted to buy some outfits for myself (irritation on her face)

R: u surely know how to calm me down but not this time u owe me one and y don't you join me in my boutique tomorrow will get u Ur outfits.

A: sure!!

As they got engrossed in their talks Avani reached at the cliff and a sudden flashback came out being water in her eyes and she stopped her conversation mid way stating Riya to give her a callback asap 

It was the place where 15 yes back Avani lost Neela to semi death state(comma) due to some criminal activity and mind

It was then when Avani decided to become IPS

But soon she got lost in her world and went and sat on the grill without noticing the danger sign board.

After few minutes a passerby happens to see her and assumed her as trying to suicide and as a gentleman with soft heart he reached there to help but soon to his realisation he realised her being a police officer and his eyes enraged getting the past glances and he was about to push her just than she turned back and her balance went off.

Before she could react she just abruptly held his hand leading him loose balance and they both fell down the cliff.

That's it for today guys .

Please share Ur reviews and also comment 

Soon will update the chapter 2