avneil- neela version

hey guys thanks for your votes and here's the part 2

chapter 2: aasman se tapke battle mein atke

so guys again here as promised!! plz give me ur feedback really appreciated and also should i continue or not

both fell of the cliff only to land hemselves in ocean , since both had a good swim skill they manged to reach the shore

after walking for a few steps avani started with her yelling and bombarding

avani: r u mad? tum samajhte kya ho apne aap ko! ajeeb sample ho!ab yaha se nikalna hoga ! just like cherry on ice cake yaha par koi lagta bhi nahi?

it is going to be tough job yaha se nikalna! all thanks to you!

she continued only to discover neil engrossed in something obviously something thats bothering him easily visible from his eyes.

she shook him to get him out of his khyali world. as soon as he came back to reality he also started the battle 

neil: chilla kyu rahi ho!? i can hear very well. and by the way ye jo situation hain vo sab tumhari vajah se hai. aadat hoti hai na tum police waalo ki hamesha galtiyaan karneki!!!

vaha par danger ka sign bhi tha par tum to tum ho na bina dekhe chali gayi aur main bhi phass gaya!but jo bhi ho mujhe nikalna haiyaha se jaldi. aapke department ki tarah hum pura din free nhi hote na

avani had enough and could not control and also started to answer

mr.jo bhi ho tumhe aisa kyu lagta hai ki hume koi kaam nhi hai aur duniya ka kaam tumhare kandhe par hai nd to inform u that is constitution mein har kisiko freedom hai kahi bhi jaane ki and har department efficient nhi hota that does not mean they do not work.

bas thoda trust hona chahiye.

neil: firstly my name is neil and you (seeing the batch on uniform) ms.avani mehta trust ki baat tum logo ke moo se acche nhi lagti ,har koi jaanta hai ki kon kitna kaam karta hai and kon corrupt hai and sabse badi problem hai ki vo acting bhi nhi karte ki vo genuinely kuch karte hai

avani to herself (relax abhi yaha se nikalna is important and i need to reach home jaldi varna jasoos(riya n sunheri) ko pata chala to mushkil ho jayega

avani: abhi tumhara police murdabaad ho gaya ho to yaha se nikle!?

neil: u sound reasonable.

avani:good. thank god! now remove ur shirt.

neil giving a weird expression

neil: i knew it police officers cannot be too good i understand the reason why you distracted me off the topic, and sorry to inform you i am not that type of person so please back off maam.

giving a killer and frustrated expression

avani:exhaling the air from lungs oh please keep ur stupid mentality with yourself i just asked so that we can ask for help making it as a flag

to which neil closses his eyes to avoid facing her without any word gave her his shirt.

now if you are done with that let's find a way out of here said neil irritatingly

you feel i m doing timepass or kind of picnic over here!? i know we have to get out of here but within few mins it will dark and it would hard to find the route and also there are wild animals over here so just wait till we find any help said avani in calm tone

fine! you wait here and only hope that someone will come and help us such as hero but i have someone at home who will b worried so i have to go and vaise bhi jangli jaanvar tumse to ache hi honge, stated neil and started walking

hey! wait why don't you understand exclaimed avani only to see him walking without listening

arre yaar ye network kaha hai! ahhh ! bas ek baar ye network aa jaye to i can sent the location to sun and she can come here said avani to herself

searching for network she eventually again bumps into the same mr.akdu who seems to be rude and unfriendly

tum mera phicha kyu kar rahi ho? kya problem hai!?dar lag raha hai!? ya kabhi koi handsome ladka nhi dekha? said neil teasingly

a:oh please na hi tum srk ho aur na hi main koi chui mui si ladki i was just searching for network so we can scoot out asap

accha hai kahin to dimaag use kiya:n

(n getting network first thing she did was informing sun abt the location )

now we have to wait till they come to help:a

wait aur tumhare saath! never, usse accha hai i will find another option:n

as he started walking he fel into the hidden animal pit unaware of it being there

and he get bruises on his arms and ankle under the trap

avani saw that an hurried for help

a: r u ok?

n: is situation me tumhe me ok dikh rha hu?

\a: ok,ok wait i will help you

meanwhile while avani was helping neil here sun(sunheri )was having a hard tym to handle amol and other members of family who were worried for avani

sun:yaar ali bhai!ye maam bhi na kuch bataye bina hi chali gayi hai sab ko kya bolo!?

ali: kya matlab haic chali gayi! hawaa hai kya?

sun: plz aap to jante ho na deeksha bua pata chala to kitni acchi khatirdari hogi

upon which ali got alarmed and started to try her number only to get it unreachable

ali:yaar ye ladki bhi na kabhi bhi problem se dur nhi rehti

but don't worry she will manage and let's wait for more few mins if kuch nhi mila to we have to go

just then sun received avani's msg and a cheerfull smile emerged and she informed him and went to get her

so guys lets see what is going to happen further till then stay tuned!!!