Race against time

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Debbie: I collapse to the floor, moaning out in pain I clutch to my side

Graham: I run over to her quickly, it's ok Debbie it's gonna be ok

Charity: oh my god Debs!!, I run over to her

Graham: stay back I know what I'm doing

Cain: you really think I'm gonna let one of his goons touch my daughter!!

Graham: do you want her die!!??

Cain: no of course we don't

Graham: then i suggest you stand back and let me do what I need to, before she bleeds to death!!!

Charity and Cain: we take a seat on the sofa clutching each other's hands tightly

Joe: I kneel beside Debbie holding onto her hand, it's gonna be ok I promise

Debbie: my eyes are slowly opening and closing, it hurts so much

Joe: I know it does but Graham knows what he' doing

Cain: get your hands off of her!

Graham: shut up!, and just let him I need to do this ok it's the only way!, now I need you to press on her wound ok with your hand Joe

Joe: I nod my head, I move closer bringing her head so it's resting on my knee I clutch on to one of her hands and my other hand I keep presses on the wound

Graham: I run back into the room finding my first aid kit, I grab a towel and run back quickly

Joe: look at me please I'm not going anywhere, just keep looking at me it's ok

Debbie: I open my eyes for a second and look up at him how could you do this to me I whisper

Joe: I rock her and back and fourth, please don't speak now save your energy

Debbie: I thought you were the one, I breathe deeply but you hurt me just like the rest I gulp back trying to keep my breathing steady

Joe: what have you done Cain!!

Cain: what have I done?!, she wouldn't be in this mess if it wasn't for you you should not have tackled the gun from me!!

Joe: why did you have a gun in the first place!!, I know what I did was so wrong but please I'm begging you to forgive me

Cain: focus on her and I swear if she dies I will hold you responsible and I will make sure for the rest of your life you pay!!

Joe: if she dies I don't have anything left to live for!!

Charity: what

Joe: if she dies I'll hand myself into the police ok, I'll say it was all my fault and I'll say I committed fraud

Charity: why would you do that

Joe: because I love her!!, at first yeah it was all about revenge but now it's something so much more I keep my hand pressed on her wound and hold her other hand tightly

Cain: I look at charity, what we gonna do

Charity: we hope that they Save our daughter!!

Joe: shouldn't we phone an ambulance!!??

Graham: no!

Joe: why?, look at her she's dying she's gonna die!!

Graham: a gunshot to the abodem can look bad is bad but she's still got a chance we're gonna do everything we can here, then your going to drive her to the hospital and your gonna say that it was a break in and that you found her

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