Debbie: I walk through village the next morning carrying my shopping, i look around I can feel somebody's eyes on me but maybe I'm just imaging it?, I keep walking until I bump into my mum
charity: Debs?, how you doing?
Debbie: not really in the mood for small talk mum
Charity: Debs please don't be like this
Debbie: like what?, you only ever ask how I am when it suits you
Charity: come on let's go into the pub and have a drink on me yeah?
Debbie: fine, I walk past mum and into the pub
Charity: so what would you like to drink?
Debbie: orange juice
Charity: you sure you don't want any bubbly??
Debbie: I'm fine thanks, I sit down on the sofa in the back room putting down my shopping
Charity: I walk in with our drinks and sit down in the chair opposite her, so what have you been up to?
Debbie: I look at mum, taking it easy, looking after my kids
Charity: you feeling ok?, since the car accident and being shot
Debbie: fine mother
Charity: I'm sorry for everything Debs
Debbie: no your not, so don't apologise to me when I know you don't mean it!!
Charity: Debs, of course I mean it I wouldn't say it if I didn't
Debbie: YOU've RUINED MY LIFE!!!
Charity. what?, no don't say that!!!
Debbie: it's true though, my whole life you haven't really been involved in and then when you are you just screw things up!!!
Charity: I look down, I know and I'm so sorry
Debbie: you told me to go for it you kept pushing and pushing!!, maybe if you hadn't of done that none of this would have happened!!
Charity: Debs that's not fair
Debbie: is it not, maybe if you weren't so money originated!!, I wouldn't be in this mess!!
Charity: it's not my fault that you jumped into bed with him!!, I never asked you to do that!!!
Debbie: if I remember correctly mother you asked me when we were in debt to sleep with him to get a money cheque!!!
Charity: I look at her, we were desperate babe!!
Debbie: yeah and I was the one who had to fix your mess!!, like always!!
Charity: yeah ok fine!!, I am a massive screw up who only cares about her herself!!
Debbie: tears fall down my face, why did I have to find out you were my mum
Charity: wait where has that come from?, that's twice you've said that now
Debbie: because that's where this all started, you didn't need to cheat on Chris!!!
Charity: your just a kid you can't comment!!
Debbie: and do you know why you cheated on Chris, because your shallow and pathetic!!!
Charity: well what does that make you then!!
Debbie: excuse me!!
Charity: well your marriage didn't work out did it!!, or don't you remember you also shagged your husbands brother!!!!
Debbie: I slap her hard around the face
Charity: I hold my cheek, Debs I didn't mean that
Debbie: you know there's one thing about you!!, you never think who's going to get hurt!!
Charity: ok listen to me please listen to me, I am so sorry that I traumatised that messed up little boy!!
Debbie: maybe he turned out like that because he had a step mother like you!!
Charity: I look at her
Debbie: hit a nerve have i!!!
Charity: he's nothing babe!! Nothing!!
Debbie: but I loved him!!!!
Charity: I look at her and tears fall down my face
Debbie: and you!!, ruined my only chance of happiness if you hadn't of cheated on Chris!!, and if you hadn't of gone into his life then none of this would have happened and if I would have never found out you were my mum he would never know that I was your daughter!!; and he would have actually genuinely wanted to be with me!!!!!!
Charity: Debs?, I'm so sorry
Debbie: I shake my head, you wouldn't know how love feels!!, I stand up and barge out the door
Charity: Debs!!!!!!!
Debbie: I run out of the pub quickly knocking everybody out of my way i finally get outside and breathe in all the fresh air
Joe: I slowly walk up pub stairs, Debs?
Debbie: I turn around to look at him, what are you still doing here?!
Joe: I can't give up on what we have, I won't give up on what we have
Debbie: I can't hear this right now
Joe: please let me take you for a drink, something to eat let me to prove to you that I can be the guy who treats you like a queen
Debbie: you've ruined everything, everything!!, I walk away
Graham: you knew this wasn't going to be easy joe
Joe: I'll get her back
Graham: I look at him, I think your kidding yourself I walk away
Joe: I stand there watching Debbie walk away
Dramatic chapter lots of shouting, will charity and Debbie fix things??
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