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Joe: what do you mean?, your sorry?

Charity: oh my god, she's dead isn't she??

Joe: please no, I collapse down to the chairs

Doctor: Debbie's in a stable condition for now, she's lost a lot of blood but were hoping with lots of rest she'll be soon recovering

Charity: how close was it?

Doctor: too close, we'll update you with news a bit later on with how's she doing

Cain: but you just said she was fine?

Doctor: yeah but we wanna do a few tests just to make sure nothing else is wrong, it's just so that we're clear

Joe: clear on what?

Doctor: if there's any damage

Cain: damage?, what do you mean by that?

Doctor: it's really hard to say

Charity: just tell us what's going on?

Doctor: we need to make sure that the bullet didn't hit any vital organs

Joe: and if it did?

Doctor: then we need to act fast

Charity: so what your saying is she's stable for now but at any minute she could just.....

Cain: don't say that

Charity: it's true that's what there saying, there saying she could die if that bullet has damaged any of her vital organs

Doctor: please don't worry yourselves, we'll know more in a few hours

Joe: so what?, you expect us to sit here in this waiting room waiting to hear wether she's going to be ok!

Doctor: I know it's hard

Joe: Hard?!, you have no idea she could be dying in there she could need your help and instead your talking to us telling us it's going to be ok!!

Cain: Oi!, Calm down Joe this isn't gonna help Debbie

Joe: I shake my head and rub my temples with my hands

Doctor: as soon as we know more I'll be able to give you a full update, I walk away

Cain: does anyone want a coffee??

Joe: I look up at him, your not serious?!

Cain: well I'm thirsty, I go to walk away

Joe: if you hadn't of had that gun we wouldn't be in this mess!!, and if you would have kept an eye out on the road then she might have had more chance of being ok!!

Charity: don't you dare blame this all on him!!, it was you as well!!

Joe: and do you not think I feel terrible for that!!

Charity: I don't know?, do you?

Joe: of course I do!, because no matter what you say I love her so much she's everything to me!!

Charity: wow is she, is that why you lied about your identity lied about everything!!

Joe: I've explained that!!

Charity: yeah well not well enough!

Joe: at least I'm here trying to get updates on her, your just sitting her feeling sorry yourselves and drinking stupid coffee!!!

Cain and charity: we sit silently, we just want her to be ok

Joe: yeah well if she isn't I'm holding the pair of you responsible!

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