The Making of a Commander (Prequel to "At Long Last") Mass Effect Fan Fiction

Anatomy Training

Jane felt her heart beating faster, as Grave slipped her top over her head. He reached around her, and unfastened her bra with just a small amount of fumbling that made her giggle. Then he carefully reached down slipping her pants and panties to the ground never reverting his eyes from hers. Jane folded her arms across her chest feeling a bit embarrassed. Grave chuckled as he watched her cheeks turn pink. "Put your arms down, let me look at you." He took a step back to view her better. Jane slowly lowered her arms keeping her eyes locked with his. Grave grinned as a low growl escaped from his throat. "You should never cover yourself, never be embarrassed, you truly look amazing." Jane released the breath she was holding and smiled. Grave lifted his shirt over his head letting it fall to the floor. He slipped out of his pants and took a step back so she could get a better look at him. Her eyes sparkled as they swept across his chest down to his waist and his...she looked up at him with a look of complete confusion. Grave roared with laughter. He knew exactly what the cause of her bewilderment was. As he was studying human anatomy earlier, he found that human male sex organs were on the outside of their bodies, as for turians, it is hid and protected behind plates. Grave took her hand and placed it on his plates below his waist causing then to shift. Jane pulled her hand back in surprise. "It's there behind the plates. It will extend outwards when it's ready. I promise" Jane chuckled and placed her hand back, and gently rubbed the plates she had felt move. Causing Grave's mandibles to click and a low growl to escape his throat. Jane looked down, her eyes widened, as his plates shifted all the way, and his sex emerged. It looked very similar to a human male sex organ, only blue in color, Jane thought it could be due to the fact turians have blue blood. Several ridges lined the long thick shaft. "Are all turians this big?" Jane swallowed. Grave looked down at himself. "I'm pretty average actually. Some turians are smaller, and some are larger." "Wow..." Jane thought to herself. "thank you God he's not on the large side. Jane grabbed a hold of his massive rod and began to stroke it.  Grave purred with pleasure, at the sensation of her soft warm hands caressing him.

Jane felt a rush of heat travel through her body as she listened to him purr, causing her to moan. Grave lifted her into his arms carrying her back to the bed slowly lowering her down on her back. He gently began licking her neck working his way to her breasts circling the pink knobs with his tongue and lightly nipping them, causing Jane to arch her back and moan with pleasure. Graves eyes began to cloud over as the tip of his sex pressed against her opening. He could feel the heat and wetness seeping from her. His chest started to rumble as he slipped further into primal mode. Jane tensed and gasped as he started to push into her. Grave stopped when he felt her body tense, and heard the sound of fear in her gasp, drawing him back to reality. He slowly pulled his sex back a little, releasing the presser she was feeling. He leaned forward, gently licking her neck and ear. "Try to relax, it will hurt less." he whispered in a low deep voice causing the heat between Jane's legs to rise. "Okay" She moaned as she took a deep breath and tried to relax her muscles inside. Grave felt her walls give as he pushed a little deeper hitting her maiden barrier. He held himself in place, and whispered against her neck. "Ready?" Jane nodded yes against his shoulder as he pushed past her barrier causing her to scream with both pain and pleasure. Grave stopped for only a moment allowing her body to adjust as his eyes clouded over, pushing him back into primal mode "Forgive me!" He growled as he lost control biting into her upper arm.

Jane's head started to spin. "Oh God Grave!" She yelled as she felt herself lung closer to her climax. Grave flew into a frenzy as he heard his lover cry out his name. He began to push harder, and deeper as he listened to her breath quicken. Jane felt the pressure build as each thrust sent a serge of pain and pleasure through her body. Grave raised his head, and bit into her soft skin between the base of her neck and top of her shoulder. The sensation caused Jane to arch her back, once again screaming her lovers name as fluid bust from her, soaking the sheets under them. Grave released his teeth from her flesh, pushed one last time hard, and deep releasing his seed with a loud roar that echoed through the room. Grave rested his weight on his arms as he licked the blood from the bites and scratches he had left on her body, waiting for their connection to return behind it's protective plates. Jane laid motionless with her eyes shut as her body trembled from the massive amount of pleasure and pain she felt at the hands of her incredible lover. The clouds over Graves eyes began to fade as his mind returned to reality. Jane moaned in protest as she felt his connection pull from her. Grave rolled to her side, placed his arms around her pulling her body close to him. Jane nuzzled her backside up against him and folded her arms into his. "Are you alright?" Grave asked in a low voice. "I am more than alright" Jane hummed in a rough but weak voice. Grave smiled, and rested his face on the top of her head. "Rest my little Varren, we'll talk in the morning"