What if Luke were on Ahch-To with a purpose? What if Luke had a prior connection to Rey? What if Captain Phasma had a whole other identity that connected her to key players on both sides of the galactic struggle for power? What if Snoke had a whole...
Congratulations on finishing the first Three Acts of 'The First Jedi'. I hope you are enjoying it!
Just wanted to let you know, I am running a contest until August 31, 2018. The first 5 people to finish reading the entire script (all 5 acts) and give me feedback on it through the following survey will be eligible to receive a LIMITED EDITION hardcopy of the script, mailed directly to your home anywhere in the U.S. or Canada!
All you need to do is COPY and PASTE the following survey questions (scroll down) into a Wattpad message, or goto: firstjediscreenplay.wordpress.com, fill in the form-fillable PDF and email it to: firstjediscreenwriter(at)gmail.com
When you finish reading Acts IV & V, I will ask for general feedback on the ending of the story, and - if you are one of the first 5 to complete it - you're a WINNER!
Winners will be announced HERE as they complete the journey! Good luck!
PLEASE NOTE: Contest ENDS August 31st, 2018 - So get your entries in soon!!
1st Winner: Twitter user (at)WhalerJacket
2nd Winner: Twitter user (at)Salty_Nerd
3rd Winner: Twitter user (at)FakeFan50
4th Winner: ???
5th Winner: ???
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FIRST JEDI - SURVEY / QUIZ
Congratulations & Thanks! You've made it through the first three acts of my alternative Episode VIII screenplay 'The First Jedi'. I know it's long, but I hope you have been enjoying it so far. There are a lot more stunning moments to come!
Before you read Acts IV and V, I need some information from you to make sure we are on the same page. Please email your completed response to: firstjediscreenwriter(at)gmail.com
QUIZ: If you've read Acts I, II and III, this will be a breeze. If not, go back and finish reading!
1. What is Captain Phasma's real name (in this story treatment)?
2. What is her family business?
3. What is the name of the Black squadron pilot that Poe is mourning?
4. Who is Phasma's brother? (What is his name?)
5. What name has been given to the sea creatures on Ahch-To?
6. What is special about the Fathiers and their jockeys?
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SURVEY: This script is still very much a work in progress. I am happy to incorporate useful, constructive feedback. Thank you for taking the time to fill this out. Much appreciated.
7. What do you think of the Canto Bight section of the story? How do you like the humor? Any suggestions of ways to shorten or tighten it up this part of the story? Is it too long?
8. What do you think of Leia's arc? Where should / might it end up?
9. What do you think of the reworking of Luke's arc so far? Where should / might it end up?
10. What do you think of Rey's arc so far? Where should / might it end up?
11. What do you think of Kylo's arc so far? Where should / might it end up?
Thanks for your feedback! I really appreciate it! Now, enjoy Acts IV and V with the link enclosed in the attached email.
