Dumb Wattpad Moments

#18

STOP. SWITCHING. POINT. OF VIEWS. EVERY. 5. SECONDS!!!

(Maya's POV)

I walked into Walmart.

(Joe's POV)

I walked into Shoprite.

(Maya's POV)

I took a...

(Joe's POV)

I took a..

(Maya's POV)

Box of cereal.

(Joe's POV)

Can of beans.

This is ridiculous. I'm fine with a couple times during the story, but every other sentence doesn't have to be a new point of view. Might as well make it 3rd person, if you're going to do this.