The flaws of being a Hiccup *in editing*

Chapter 29: some place dark

*unedited*

Astrid

Urgh my head. I had the strangest dream. Or was it? My eyes snapped open. What? Where was I? This can't be real, I've got to be still dreaming. I struggled as I noticed my hands were tied behind my back and my legs were chained to the wall. I couldn't move. I heard ringing as I noticed that a bell was attached to the chains. I couldn't move. My axe had been taken. Great...

I could see barely anything. The only light was from the moon through the barred window. All I could make out was a door in front of me and the chains holding me in place. Creeeeaaaaakkkk...

The door slowly creaked open. Oh know.

"Oh, I see someone's awake..." I recognised the voice but couldn't make out the face. Who was it.

"what am I doing here?!" I yelled to him still struggling.

"haha that's for me to know and for you to find out..." I watched as the figure edged closer bringing his hands to my face.

"so beautiful..." I spat in his face and turned away.

"I'll teach you a lesson for doing that to me!" he raged. Suddenly I felt a burning pain in my arm, it didn't feel deep but was still very painful. I yelped in pain as he just laughed. He cut off a piece of my hair too.

"Just a souvenir..." he chuckled. He brought his hand up to my face again stroking my cheek. I couldn't get away. I felt tears stinging my eyes as he gripped my cheeks pulling his lips to mine. It was horrible. They were meant for Hiccup not him. I felt his tongue slip into my mouth as I bit it. He yelped in pain and then hit me in the stomach.

"wouldn't want to smash your pretty face now would we?" I moaned in pain. He threw something at me as he finally left. Tears escaped my eyes as I sobbed. Please, Hiccup come save me... I knelt onto the ground as I rested my head against the wall. Until I finally cried myself to sleep.

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Finally everything is going to plan. Hiccup will finally be gone, I'll have his night fury and that little beauty in there a win, win. Although I kind of have her now don't I. She will learn to respect me, oh yes she will. I know this one day she will be mine.

"Guards you know what to do!" I shouted at them as they headed into Astrids cell. Moments later I heard screams of,

"please stop" and "help me" and "Hiccup save me, please..." I laughed. Oh he will come alright. I slipped her hair which I had cut off into a envelope and wiped the blood off of my dagger I dropped that in the envelope too. I quickly wrote it.

"guards make sure this gets to Berk..." they nodded and grinned. I decided to join in with the other guards in Astrids cell, I couldn't let them have all the fun...

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