As I get older, I get more and more burdened with this story. It is not written well. I originally started it when I was 11 and it has since been 5 years. I've finished this story 3 times over. I've never posted those versions because when I go back to revise them it just does not seem to do the story justice.
If I'm going to make a final and alternate ending to this story There are going to be a few drastic changes.
1. This is no longer a vampire story.
That has got to go, I haven't liked vampire stories in three years. I'll change the genres to Humor and Romance probably. I've debated over this for a long time, it may completely destroy the story's plot, but I think it'll make it easier to flow.
2. (For people that have read an alternate version) The clairvoyant scene will never happen and Rayvine's biological parent's situation will be much different.
3. Ace is going to play a bigger role in this version.
That's about it, I guess. You can comment on your opinions or any questions you may have below! I will gladly read and answer your questions, and accept any criticism or encouragement head this way.
Sincerely,
XoRobinEggBlue101
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