The first chapter of my new story is up and I'd really appreciate some feedback on it :)

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Trick of Fate
Teen FictionWhen Meryl and Charlie meet with a collision will they fall hard? They have one passion ice dancing but neither have partners. When they agree, it's up to Charlie to show Meryl she can trust him. But will that trust turn into love?
Authors note
The first chapter of my new story is up and I'd really appreciate some feedback on it :)